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Title: A night you will never forget
Post by: razvanux on 2020-05-12, 17:58:31

Hi Guys,

This time a different story from a different time.
As usual 3ds max 2017, corona render and Phoenix FD.
Let me know what you think .

Cheers.

Title: Re: A night you will never forget
Post by: Designerman77 on 2020-05-12, 18:55:27

While my machine is rendering on a small bathroom scene :) I´ll give you my personal impression on your bathroom.

Already saw it on your website.
Now, seeing it once again, it has the same effect on me: a bit hard to focus on anything in the scene due to those countless glossy, tiny tiles.
The ceiling could be in darkness, too... not lit. So the view would automatically go more to the centre and that vomiting dude. :)

Technical stuff: the metal sheets look too 2D. Give them a thicker edge.
Mirrors are too clean. The cry for some imperfections. The same for that paper towel box.
Also try less light and contrast on the tiles in the background. They also distract too much from the essential of your story.

I hope you take my impression as constructive feedback and appreciation for your work.
You know... it is always easier to see "flaws" in other peoples´work. :)

Title: Re: A night you will never forget
Post by: razvanux on 2020-05-13, 10:48:03

Thanks for the feedback .
The metal sheet is exactly like that. The material is not yet there. https://www.antoniolupi.it/en/products/sinks/lavandino
I realised with project that if you have dark walls and no white in the room it's taking allot of time to render.
Thanks for the feedback .