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Title: Family room - First project in Corona render
Post by: picfad on 2014-03-02, 23:09:44

Hello.It my first project in corona render and 3ds max.
critique is welcome.

Title: Re: Family room - First project in Corona render
Post by: Dervish on 2014-03-03, 02:30:02

good images, However,

1) Cushions could be better.
2) Image No.2, it seems there is a tiling issue, its not lining with the cut, above the television.
3) Image 4, floating chair. ( because you removed the carpet :) )

Ceiling is nice and I do like the orange chair design. :)

Title: Re: Family room - First project in Corona render
Post by: maru on 2014-03-03, 10:58:58

1. Everything is a bit noisy.
2. Same texture for floor and ceiling... looks strange but maybe it has to be like this.
3. Mirrored textures.
4. Some interpenetrating objects.
5. The kitchen looks kind of "flat".

Title: Re: Family room - First project in Corona render
Post by: picfad on 2014-03-03, 11:16:54

Tnx Dervish and maru fot the critique!

1) Cushions - Yes its not good , try to fix
2) Image No.2, it seems there is a tiling issue, its not lining with the cut, above the television. - This the idea in this project , client like this
3) Image 4, floating chair. ( because you removed the carpet :) ) -  )))))

1. Everything is a bit noisy. - Every picture is about 2 hours , but I think too about noise . Can you advise something to do clean image ?
2. Same texture for floor and ceiling... looks strange but maybe it has to be like this. - Client  like this color
3. Mirrored textures. - What do you mean with mirrored textures ?
4. Some interpenetrating objects. -
5. The kitchen looks kind of "flat". - The main idea to be flat in this project.

Title: Re: Family room - First project in Corona render
Post by: maru on 2014-03-03, 12:32:27

Quote from: picfad on 2014-03-03, 11:16:54

1. Everything is a bit noisy. - Every picture is about 2 hours , but I think too about noise . Can you advise something to do clean image ?

Looks like your image needs better antialiasing and better GI at the same time. Best solution for this would be to let it cook for some more time. It also appears that you get most noise in areas lit by Corona lights - this might be fixable with "lights samples multiplier" (LSM) - try increasing it to 3-4 and observe.

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3. Mirrored textures. - What do you mean with mirrored textures ?

This is visible for example on the wooden case of speakers.

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4. Some interpenetrating objects. -

Pillows are cutting through the sofa.