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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Vlad Vernica on 2019-10-29, 13:06:16

Title: Dusty
Post by: Vlad Vernica on 2019-10-29, 13:06:16
The second image of a mini-series I’m working on. Composition study first priority. More Bladerunner as reference this time.
In the comments, I will put the original render in Corona 3dsMax.
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Title: Re: Dusty
Post by: Vlad Vernica on 2019-10-29, 13:08:20
Original render with Corona
Title: Re: Dusty
Post by: cjwidd on 2019-10-31, 15:31:03
So my overall impression is that I really like where the shot is going, but for me the focal point (see attached '2019_00_BladeRunnerSand_B01 2') is competing with the composition, which is very atmospheric and moody - the spaceship doesn't enhance the composition, for me personally.

I would also consider experimenting with more color (see attached '2019_00_BladeRunnerSand_B01 3'). Again, that is just my preference, but I think there is an opportunity there to enhance the image.