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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: Samurai Pizza Cat on 2012-11-02, 21:30:27

Title: Interior testing
Post by: Samurai Pizza Cat on 2012-11-02, 21:30:27

Hi there.

Started and finished my first interior scene today, as always C&C are welcomed to help improve the scene :)

Rendering time was 30 min.

Title: Re: Interior testing
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2012-11-02, 21:44:33

I don't think exterior matches very well...  perhaps you could try to put some card with tree silhouette between the sun and interior, so it casts shadows of branches into the room. And also, there should not be any burned out solid black holes in background ;)

There is quite a few pictures floating around on google images, so you could try to find one that would match better ;)

https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#q=forest+sunrise&um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbm=isch&source=lnt&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&sa=X&ei=zi-UUK22IYjj4QTHqIHYDA&ved=0CCEQpwUoBA&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=42feed12e8978950&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965 (https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#q=forest+sunrise&um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbm=isch&source=lnt&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&sa=X&ei=zi-UUK22IYjj4QTHqIHYDA&ved=0CCEQpwUoBA&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=42feed12e8978950&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965)

https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&tbm=isch&q=forest+sunset&revid=1720307894&sa=X&ei=1S-UUKzXFdHZ4QS5iYD4CQ&ved=0CEEQgxY&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=7933f3e058529937&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965 (https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&tbm=isch&q=forest+sunset&revid=1720307894&sa=X&ei=1S-UUKzXFdHZ4QS5iYD4CQ&ved=0CEEQgxY&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=7933f3e058529937&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965)

Title: Re: Interior testing
Post by: maru on 2012-11-02, 22:01:46

I like it, it has this strange feeling of waking up in a secluded house in the middle of a forest. :) The only thing I don't like is that greyish underexposed upper left corner. If it was meant to be something like a vignette, you should have used different blending mode.

Title: Re: Interior testing
Post by: Samurai Pizza Cat on 2012-11-02, 22:57:46

I agree with the background and light cookies.

Yeah it´s supposed to be a vignette... Man, I guess I´ve been staring at the scene for to long now  :D

Thanks you two.