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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: daveclive on 2018-11-20, 17:13:42

Title: WIP improvments
Post by: daveclive on 2018-11-20, 17:13:42

Hi Guys,

I'm working on a product shot for a protein paste.
Does anyone have any suggestions on how to further improve the render, maybe lighting or materials?

I have attached a quick pass draft render of how it's looking so far

C4D R19 / Corona B2 c3
OSX

any suggestions or comments welcome

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: Jadefox on 2018-11-20, 23:02:53

How about very soft fingerprint smudges ( barely noticeable ) at the markers you would
tear it upon ?

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: Gruender on 2018-11-21, 09:32:12

Maybe give it an environment and let it stand up, maybe lean it on a fruit bowl or something (don't know about your client wishes).
You need a better camera angle and image compositing. Angle and placement are a bit boring at the moment, mood and lighting look good.

cheers

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: Beanzvision on 2018-11-21, 09:57:43

I agree with the above. It does look a little boring. It definitely needs an environment. Perhaps an open packet with the actual product scattered could be interesting. Currently, It's lost with that background.

(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=22485.0;attach=93933;image)

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: Gruender on 2018-11-21, 12:52:16

For faster feedback you could use the Corona discord. I guess you get faster and maybe even more feedback.

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: daveclive on 2018-11-22, 10:27:02

The environment idea looks awesome.

thanks for the feedback guys

Title: Re: WIP improvments
Post by: Beanzvision on 2018-11-22, 12:01:28

Quote from: daveclive on 2018-11-22, 10:27:02

The environment idea looks awesome.

thanks for the feedback guys

You're most welcome!