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General Category => Gallery => Learner’s Corner => Topic started by: omaranbar@gmail.com on 2018-11-03, 04:56:59

Title: Plane
Post by: omaranbar@gmail.com on 2018-11-03, 04:56:59

Corona 3d rendering for cargo planes.

Title: Re: Plane
Post by: burnin on 2018-11-03, 21:04:14

Nice attempt, but...
1&2 - Lighting doesn't fit (observe how light falls over the object and where the lights sources are in the image) - also take care of reflections, know the surface planes have.
3 - Scale is off (take warehouse elements in relation to the plane's elements - seems quite a small plane ;)
4 - That background, can you recognize the perspective - either clouds are off or the plane is flying extremely sideways... wouldn't wanna be on :D

Disregard my comment, if you can't see it... but keep up the spirit!

Title: Re: Plane
Post by: omaranbar@gmail.com on 2018-11-05, 07:39:33

Thanks for your comments.

Title: Re: Plane
Post by: gpz on 2018-11-05, 08:58:43

it needs more reflections.
i know that is 'too much'..but look at this work.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/38125547/Airbus-A350-900
https://www.behance.net/gallery/42934287/A350-900

GpZ