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Title: My first work
Post by: dadorrodrigues on 2013-10-25, 03:54:53

(http://s7.postimg.org/s4k16e8lj/Loja_Lauro_Bordartes_v01_3k_composity.jpg) (http://postimg.org/image/s4k16e8lj/)

Title: Re: My first work
Post by: Dexyd on 2013-10-25, 09:20:14

Hi,
Your DOF is to small and your camera is just a bit to high. Because of this you get the feeling you're watching a diorama. A lot of materials seem rather flat. Personally I think you've overdone the Chromatic Abberation.

Otherwise, it is a pretty good start.

Title: Re: My first work
Post by: dadorrodrigues on 2013-10-28, 23:40:28

thanksss
other renders

Title: Re: My first work
Post by: Benjamin_F on 2013-10-29, 12:43:05

Hi

Here is a tutorial about how to reduce the problem of tiling textures by Neil Blevins.
http://www.neilblevins.com/cg_education/tiling_trick/tiling_trick.htm

I think the lighting is too flat. Are you using corona sky? Doing lighting tests with a simple gray override material, can help to
concentrate on lighting and fun.

hope this helps

Title: Re: My first work
Post by: dadorrodrigues on 2013-10-29, 14:09:03

hi thanks for this tutorial
i used a hdri in enviroment,    
suggestion?
thanks a lot

Title: Re: My first work
Post by: Benjamin_F on 2013-10-31, 16:23:24

Corona sky is really good, simple and fast. Maybe easier at the beginning, you cant go wrong.
And if you want custom background or reflections from hdri environment, you can do it at corona render settings/environment tab, environment overrides.
Use photo references, helps a lot.

hope this helps

cheers