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Title: first renders in Corona
Post by: foxid on 2013-09-23, 09:44:37

First time using

Title: Re: first renders in Corona
Post by: foxid on 2013-09-23, 09:56:48

2nd

Title: Re: first renders in Corona
Post by: foxid on 2013-10-04, 09:42:16

Added

Title: Re: first renders in Corona
Post by: maru on 2013-10-04, 10:57:38

This thread needs some attention!

I think your works need some polishing. Generally in every project there are some very good points and some really weak. In all of them lighting is pretty convincing. In first one I don't like smooth, flat furniture and those chairs and ceiling lamps look like they would really need some work.

Second one is so crazy that it would be very hard to make it realistic but I think what is most annoying is the lack of contrast, it's kind of "washed out" and overexposed.

On third one the tree model kills everything - it looks like a low-poly model for a game.

Title: Re: first renders in Corona
Post by: foxid on 2013-10-10, 11:42:20

Quote from: maru on 2013-10-04, 10:57:38

This thread needs some attention!

I think your works need some polishing. Generally in every project there are some very good points and some really weak. In all of them lighting is pretty convincing. In first one I don't like smooth, flat furniture and those chairs and ceiling lamps look like they would really need some work.

Second one is so crazy that it would be very hard to make it realistic but I think what is most annoying is the lack of contrast, it's kind of "washed out" and overexposed.

On third one the tree model kills everything - it looks like a low-poly model for a game.

thx for the reply. you are right in all cases.i just need more time to make it perfect. but my boss dont think that i must spend more than one day for one work.  anyway, i mast do my own work for the gallary and your words are true.