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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Mognimba on 2017-06-25, 20:37:38

Title: FRA House
Post by: Mognimba on 2017-06-25, 20:37:38

Hello guys,

I want to share with you my personal rendering made with 3dsmax and corona 1.6
This project is based on reference images from Architects: Beczak / Beczak / Architekci; Location: Piastów, Poland

Link: http://www.archdaily.com/office/beczak-beczak-architekci

Any comment will be great

Title: Re: FRA House
Post by: Bzuco on 2017-07-05, 12:38:28

You did it very well.
Make reproduction from real reference is always good way for learning.
I like overall lighting and also 1:1 render format.
There are only few imperfection which can be easily corrected:
-add some random UV offset on wooden boards
-equalize brightnes on sidewalk texture and add some brightness variation using some procedural map or some smudge/dirt/.. texture
-add random Z rotation on fern plants
-choice another grass preset, because cut grass mixed with normal bunches of grass doesn't make a sense :). In far distance it doesn't matter, but near infront of camera it is visible.

Title: Re: FRA House
Post by: Mognimba on 2017-07-05, 14:07:58

Thanks for the feedback, i will take into account all the points you mentioned and make an update