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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: cabrnoch on 2017-03-31, 12:38:52

Title: Residence on the Lake
Post by: cabrnoch on 2017-03-31, 12:38:52

Hello guys,

this is my recent non commercial project.

I would like to hear your opinion and criticism, so I can improve my skills.

Thanks

Title: Re: Residence on the Lake
Post by: Erald on 2017-03-31, 20:33:26

Great image! In my opinion, what ruins a bit the scene is that shinny seat right in the middle of the frame. Either move it a bit so it doesn't ruin the composition, or change the material to smth else. It was the very first thing where my eye went as soon as I clicked the render. I would not concentrate the attention in such a small element of the scene.
Otherwise, great render and great lightening! 

Title: Re: Residence on the Lake
Post by: cabrnoch on 2017-04-03, 08:18:53

Erald thank you for your comment. I agree. Improvement of composition is one of my current goals.