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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-11-27, 14:31:37

Title: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-11-27, 14:31:37

Bang & Olufsen
Beosound 2

Corona 1.5

3D's Max 2016

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: grafichissimo on 2016-11-28, 09:22:20

Nice but remove the canvas it is distracting. :)

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-11-28, 16:15:11

Thanks

More close ups are coming.

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: Seth Richardson on 2016-12-01, 00:49:12

First thing I see is that plate and something on it not sure what it is but doesn't look like food.  Seems a little weird to have in this scene.  I mean you have an audio product on a console hall table, some books stacked, then.... food? 

So out of place.

Everything else looks good though.

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-12-01, 20:18:49

Yes you are right, it lacks logic, but I have tried to replicate everyday chaos in a living room.

Sound system , lot of books on architecture and Éclair in the plate.

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-12-02, 10:19:35

Closeup.

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: Jens on 2016-12-03, 13:02:13

The quality is good, but I agree with the others. That half eaten cake is so weird. It draws the focus away from the main object. I'd definitely remove it. I wouldn't replace it with anything either. Let the speaker or what ever that thing is, stand out ;)

Title: Re: Bang & Olufsen
Post by: GorArakelyanF on 2016-12-05, 09:32:01

Thank you Jans )))

I really like your Weekend House)