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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: lightmansor on 2016-11-17, 02:54:01

Title: A song for the dark side
Post by: lightmansor on 2016-11-17, 02:54:01
A song for the dark side - no post
Title: Re: A song for the dark side
Post by: Christa Noel on 2016-11-17, 08:02:06
haha.. nice idea!
some dirt on the piano would be nice and the black keys seems has too much height :)
Title: Re: A song for the dark side
Post by: maru on 2016-11-17, 12:18:13
The idea is really nice, so I think it could be turned into a masterpiece simply by:
-slightly changing the cropping (there is too little space left for the trooper, towards the right side)
-working more on the materials - the wooden planks look nice, but the bump map is too strong, generally most objects, including the main character, lack reflectivity
-working on lighting and post processing to define the general atmosphere of the image
Title: Re: A song for the dark side
Post by: lightmansor on 2016-11-18, 01:19:19
Nice tips Maru!
I'll hone some things! Thanks so much!

P.S.Nothing better than talking to a Corona grandmaster ;)
Title: Re: A song for the dark side
Post by: lightmansor on 2016-11-18, 01:20:04
nice idea! Thkx!!

haha.. nice idea!
some dirt on the piano would be nice and the black keys seems has too much height :)
Title: Re: A song for the dark side
Post by: Tanakov on 2016-11-18, 11:52:47
Also ST armours are more shiny