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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: MarsYellow on 2016-10-14, 05:11:58

Title: WIP what do you think of the work so far and How do you think I can improve it?
Post by: MarsYellow on 2016-10-14, 05:11:58

I am working on this small apartment and i would like to know your opinion
what do you think of the work so far and How do you think I can improve it?
Feel free to give your opinion in the design and in the CG.
Thanks.

Title: Re: WIP what do you think of the work so far and How do you think I can improve it?
Post by: philippelamoureux on 2016-10-14, 09:49:02

It looks a bit flat but that's probably because of the colour palette! I think you should add more colours to the scene! Right now it's pretty much 50 shades of greyish-brown hehe!

Title: Re: WIP what do you think of the work so far and How do you think I can improve it?
Post by: grafichissimo on 2016-10-14, 10:12:56

So far is not so bad.
I quite like the soft light, some consideration:
Reinforce the light above the table, orange-ish as it is, but stronger.
Use a HDRI light or play with Corona sky in order to get more blue light coming through the window.
Revise the sofa material,delete the cushion they are not good.
Add more reflection and accuracy on the material/texture, the wood wall for instance. 
Avoid the repetitive tile on the floor.
Last but no least a little of contrast over all the image.

Have fun!

Title: Re: WIP what do you think of the work so far and How do you think I can improve it?
Post by: MarsYellow on 2016-11-23, 02:42:17

I totally forgot that I posted this here sorry about that .
Thanks a lot for your responses that project kind of ended there but your advices are really good and I will use them in my upcoming projects .
Actually the color pallet is 50 shades of greyish-Brown on  purpose :D