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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Ałtaj on 2016-09-15, 19:56:31

Title: Barber container
Post by: Ałtaj on 2016-09-15, 19:56:31

Hey guys,

here i am sharing my second work with corona. I've already fall in love with this engine and can't wait to learn more about it!
Hope you like my work :)

3ds max/ corona

Title: Re: Barber container
Post by: JacopoGrosso on 2016-09-15, 21:59:19

I tell you what I think:
- they seems flat, no perspective, so you could add some dof;
- details are ok but there is too much light and this gives flatness to the scene because there are no shadows (first render);
- to give more realism you can decrease saturation;
- second render is better (less light);
- on the left of the second render I don't understand if there is a TV or a paint..if it's a TV you could use material completely  reflective or satin, but emissive with the same diffuse bitmap

Try and see if it's better :)

Title: Re: Barber container
Post by: Ałtaj on 2016-09-15, 22:32:47

Thank you, will try those when there will be more time :)

Title: Re: Barber container
Post by: JacopoGrosso on 2016-09-16, 12:25:07

You're welcome, I'll wait for update :)

Title: Re: Barber container
Post by: maru on 2016-09-16, 15:31:31

Generally I agree with JacopoGrosso, but one note: be careful with DoF. If you want to enable it, make it really subtle. In real life there wouldn't be any pronounced DoF visible with such a wide angle lens.

Title: Re: Barber container
Post by: Ałtaj on 2016-09-16, 18:27:49

Dzięki Marcin :)