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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: ondrike on 2013-07-25, 16:47:04

Title: Heineken
Post by: ondrike on 2013-07-25, 16:47:04

Hi guys,

I just finish this one piece for my portfolio and of course it´s done with corona :)

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: maru on 2013-07-25, 18:50:38

I think there are too many water drops or they are placed too uniformly. And proportions of the bottle look strange, as if it was very short or had a very wide neck. But overall it looks good.

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: Alan on 2013-07-25, 20:30:59

very nice ondrike! How you did these drops??

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: ondrike on 2013-07-25, 21:46:53

maru : thank you, this bottle i used as the reference image and as you can see, neck is really wide

Alan : I´m glad you like it. water drops are 3 different types of drops scattered over the bottle surface

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2013-07-25, 21:55:10

Looks more like kiwi lemonade :)

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: ondrike on 2013-07-25, 22:43:52

oh sh*t I forgot to add reference picture

Title: Re: Heineken
Post by: Nupsi on 2013-07-26, 09:40:15

I´m with Maru on this one. There are far to many waterdrops and a lot of them pointing into the wrong direction ;-) There is still some way to go to reach the reference. Besides that, nice work. Keep it up :-)

LG
Nupsi