Chaos Corona Forum
General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Pawel Szczesny on 2016-04-26, 12:59:16
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I am new to 3D. This is my first project.
I will be grateful for the critic :)
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and 3 wersion
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This is really great! Near perfect if this is truly your first full project.
Your Color however is all over the place. The Chromatic Aberration of the third image is just way too powerful. You propably set it up when viewed in a small preview, but full screen it is just unrealistic and destroys the image. The extreme lens distortion as well.
The fullbright parts of the image should stay 255 255 255 white. Colorcorrecting them in that way in LDR tints the 255 255 255 to one channel clipped and the other lowered. This is unrealistic and looks wrong. Either color correct in HDR, or don't touch the fullbright white, basicly use the color curves instead of color wheels.
Contrast looks good though.
Left side ceiling has a 10cm gap. Is this architectual or a mistake? Looks odd.
Lastly:
Subjectively I tend not to overdo color correction, but compare to a photo and match the low contrast and unsaturated colors of the real world and just add a tinieeee tiny bit of contrast. Most consumer viewing devices add their own bullshit amount of blue and high contrast, so correcting for your calibrated screen can be very sad once you see it butchered with extra deep blacks on a smartphone.
Also, you seem to do that color contrast thing, Cold highlights, Warm midtones. I absolutely despise it. It has no basis in a medium, that tries to imitate reality, but again just IMO :]
edit: two closeby power outlets are always combined in one plastic frame, the gap in between the outlets looks very odd, maybe different where you live.
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Thank you very much for your advices :)
To claryfy - this is not my first contact with Corona, but first project made from start to finish. I am learning 3d for few months. Still a lot to improve :)
"Left side ceiling has a 10cm gap. Is this architectual or a mistake? Looks odd." - this is architectural
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i like the first image, natural lighting. but the 3rd could have less CA.
keep it coming.