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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Aokhoacden on 2016-04-06, 18:20:45

Title: Dining
Post by: Aokhoacden on 2016-04-06, 18:20:45

Hi guys,
Here is one view in my most recent work,
I hope you like it :)
(https://c2.staticflickr.com/2/1522/26274013575_edfa39bea7_h.jpg)

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: leocv on 2016-04-06, 18:42:50

Very nice work! :)

Cheers,
Leo.

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: Aokhoacden on 2016-04-07, 14:52:58

Thanks Leo :D

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: FrostKiwi on 2016-04-07, 15:22:08

Really nice.
Nitpicks being the IMO overdone sharpening. It creates strong sharpening artifacts on the lamp and makes the image look what people discribe as "Computery". The ceiling lamps are just white, a simple half sphere with mirror material would boost the realism.
Also this is totally taste, room is too clean to be photo real. Floor and right cupboard need to have a small amount of dirt in reflective slot. Like the awesome car dirt, thats barely visible form here:
https://corona-renderer.com/homepage/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/BMW4-by-Ludvik-Koutny-And-ProgressiveFX.jpg

edit: A ceiling lamp that close to the window seems odd as an architecture choise. But I don't understand shit about architecture so feel free to ignore :D

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: romullus on 2016-04-07, 15:24:49

You should put that link in to your signature, me think ;]

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: FrostKiwi on 2016-04-07, 15:26:01

Quote from: romullus on 2016-04-07, 15:24:49

You should put that link in to your signature, me think ;]

Ye^^ It's just that good of a dirt example.

Title: Re: Dining
Post by: Aokhoacden on 2016-04-09, 05:07:28

Quote from: SairesArt on 2016-04-07, 15:22:08

Really nice.
Nitpicks being the IMO overdone sharpening. It creates strong sharpening artifacts on the lamp and makes the image look what people discribe as "Computery". The ceiling lamps are just white, a simple half sphere with mirror material would boost the realism.
Also this is totally taste, room is too clean to be photo real. Floor and right cupboard need to have a small amount of dirt in reflective slot. Like the awesome car dirt, thats barely visible form here:
https://corona-renderer.com/homepage/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/BMW4-by-Ludvik-Koutny-And-ProgressiveFX.jpg

edit: A ceiling lamp that close to the window seems odd as an architecture choise. But I don't understand shit about architecture so feel free to ignore :D

Thanks your comment Saires, I would change a few things :)