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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-03-23, 15:18:38

Title: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-03-23, 15:18:38

Hi all
I came today with an image i made super quicly inspired by Ned post yesterday, actualy all what i was doing is trying to recreate the same mood
I hope you like it and tell me what do you think about it
Thanks alot

Inspiration:
(http://www.realpolygons.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/sofaflasha.jpg)

The flash try:
(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=11370.0;attach=44546;image)

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Nekrobul on 2016-03-23, 17:50:26

Flashlight is not magic key to sucsess. It works only when the geomery and textures are done properly.

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: romullus on 2016-03-23, 19:28:01

Cat's shadow should be sharp too.

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: PROH on 2016-03-24, 00:28:05

To me it looks like there's something wrong with the scale of the different elements.

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-03-25, 14:20:09

Hi all again and thanks alots fro your replys
@Nekrobul I'm confused by your comment because what i undrestand from it that i totaly missed my goal to mimic the mood on the reference image. If yes can you please tell me point by point all your observations so i can enhance my work  and thanks

@romullus Thank you, for making me notice it

@PROH i was using and 50 mm camera lens  so maybe because of that  because it flatten the perspective and thanks underlining it

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Nekrobul on 2016-03-25, 14:33:08

Quote from: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-03-25, 14:20:09

Hi all again and thanks alots fro your replys
@Nekrobul I'm confused by your comment because what i undrestand from it that i totaly missed my goal to mimic the mood on the reference image. If yes can you please tell me point by point all your observations so i can enhance my work  and thanks

@romullus Thank you, for making me notice it

@PROH i was using and 50 mm camera lens  so maybe because of that  because it flatten the perspective and thanks underlining it

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-03-25, 14:45:26

@Nekrobul Huge THANKS  i realy apreciate your help

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-04-01, 00:29:53

Here it's a wip after all Nekrobul notes so i hope i'm getting closer to the goal. if no so pls tell me  and Thanks alot

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: romullus on 2016-04-01, 09:27:40

Some things looks little bit off scale. Electrical cord does nothing but distracts from main focus point. Some textures could be of higher quality.

Moving this topic to wip board.

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: maru on 2016-04-01, 11:21:56

The leather material and the sofa looks good, but not the rest. The wall material looks like a pasted photo, if you want a structure like this, you should use proper bump maps so that it interacts with light the way it should.

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-04-01, 14:34:33

Thanks alot guys, your comment makes me realy progress and thanks for  taking the time  replying.
@romullus i was thinking moving it by my self so thanks for doing it

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-04-05, 16:44:02

Hello guys so i was working on that project and i wanted to share with you where i got so far .
here u will find an addditional image where i was testing the hair and fur with corona render .
Tell me what do you think about it and thanks
(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=11370.0;attach=44952;image)
(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=11370.0;attach=44950;image)

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: maru on 2016-04-05, 17:13:28

Definitely better. Also +1... no... +5 to creepiness for the eyeless bunny!

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Loki_bg on 2016-04-11, 15:40:33

That is very nice and realistic :)i tried one flash with some test shaders and hdri with low intensity

Title: Re: The flash try
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2016-04-12, 15:23:56

Quote from: Loki_bg on 2016-04-11, 15:40:33

That is very nice and realistic :)i tried one flash with some test shaders and hdri with low intensity

Thanks alot you too Nicely done but if u can add some bump to the black plastic shader just a little bit, it looks super perfect that's why