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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Ohnet on 2016-02-18, 19:33:06

Title: Coffee shop
Post by: Ohnet on 2016-02-18, 19:33:06

Hello!
This is my last job done with Corona for  C4D! post with PS

C&C are welcome

Title: Re: Coffee shop
Post by: GiuseppeAzzaro on 2016-02-22, 05:35:05

first image, second table. something is wrong.

Title: Re: Coffee shop
Post by: Nejc Kilar on 2016-02-22, 10:09:01

Seen it on Facebook before and I still really like it. To me you got an interesting composition going and you are balancing it out very nicely with all the details in the right places.

There are a few small issues, like the table in the second image which is mapped a little off and I also think you could have added a wee bit more of details in some areas but then again I really like how some areas are a bigger focus than others in terms of whats going on in the composition.

Bottom line, really nice work man!

Title: Re: Coffee shop
Post by: tomislavn on 2016-02-22, 11:17:29

That second table is simply rotated by 90 degrees :) nothing spectacular going on there, just a small mistake.

Anyway, I like the set :) Nice work.

Title: Re: Coffee shop
Post by: Ohnet on 2016-02-22, 14:47:11

thanks for the comments!

Overall I only had 2-3 day of work to work everything, that is one of the reason I had some miss in some details.
in the 2nd image the table is rotated 90d. indeed and forgot to change the plates.