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Title: Heart candy
Post by: Wilson Marques on 2016-01-31, 16:53:05

I folks!

A quick shot of Heart candies

C4D - Corona - ps

Have a nice day.

(http://i793.photobucket.com/albums/yy212/Wilsoneju/Candy0089_zps8hhoivss.jpg)

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: bluebox on 2016-01-31, 17:46:03

Looks nice.

If you're looking for suggestions, I'd recommend changing that toxic blueish tone to something more appealing, and maybe adjusting the framing in a way that the point of focus would be on one specific piece of candy rather than on the space between them.

Other than that nice piece.

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: Wilson Marques on 2016-01-31, 18:26:20

Thanks mate.

I really appreciate your suggestions!

cheers!

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: krassnoludek on 2016-02-01, 17:25:36

Hi! It is a good start. My main criticism would be:
- overexposure
- this kind of candy screams for SSS materials; like here:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Bw0Bl (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Bw0Bl)

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: dubcat on 2016-02-01, 18:00:39

The candy looks delicious :)

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: Wilson Marques on 2016-02-01, 21:18:02

Hi krassnoludek,

Thanks! Yes...overexposure kill a litle bit. But...i like this "washed out" kind of image for this render. Personal taste! :)
And I use translucency for the candys...but not so much .... apparently! :)

Thanks dubcat! ;)

And gys...sorry about my english...i'm a little rusty!

Hugs

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: Wilson Marques on 2016-02-02, 09:06:15

Hi guys!

Another one:

(http://i793.photobucket.com/albums/yy212/Wilsoneju/Candy_02_zpsy9bp3e8h.jpg)

Now...the sugar...hmmm...i don't know....what do you think?

Hugs

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: bluebox on 2016-02-02, 09:17:34

IMHO previous one was a lot better in terms of lighting and shaders - with the exception of colours :)

Sugar turned out ... a lot less tasty :D Esp on the piece that is in direct focus. You can see some gray grains, it never looks like this.
Strong direct light introduced too much local contrast making everything look kinda dirty. You could try adding some local light enlightening those dark areas (lower left image corner) and it might still look good tho.

Keep em coming :)

Title: Re: Heart candy
Post by: Wilson Marques on 2016-02-02, 11:36:56

Hi bluebox! Thanks one more time! You...you're totally right!
Another shot:

(http://i793.photobucket.com/albums/yy212/Wilsoneju/Candy_02_02_zpsjywlow5k.jpg)



Thanks for your suggestions! ;)

hug