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Title: House in nature
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-12-16, 14:44:32

Title: House in nature
programs used: 3dsmax, corona, growfx
description: a personal project I did in my free time..hope u like it :)

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: Image Box Studios on 2015-12-17, 07:06:52

very nice. fog look great. but i have a suggestion, can you please desaturate green value little bit.

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: maru on 2015-12-17, 12:02:40

some brutal quick levels + hue saturation

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-12-17, 12:21:23

 it doesnt look realistic with that much lightning even the raw is dark cause by the surrounding trees blocking the lights.

A lighter version here just for the lolz

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: Mr.Schorsch on 2015-12-17, 12:22:25

i must admit, that i like the op's Version more than yours Maru. The mood is somehow better with this deep dark tones. IMO

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: maru on 2015-12-17, 14:45:22

No problem, that was just a suggestion/idea. I guess it depends on the goal mainly - is the image intended to express something? sell the house? show some features? build atmosphere? ...

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: selant on 2015-12-17, 15:36:03

very nice renderings.. thanks for your work. can you mention about the grass material and what kind of displacement map/settings ? Thank you.

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: ylucic on 2015-12-17, 15:40:15

I kinda like it. Reminds me of this photos I had as wallpapers some time ago..

https://flic.kr/s/aHsk7dBBbG   (https://flic.kr/s/aHsk7dBBbG)

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-12-17, 16:22:24

@ylucic yeah i went for a dark moody scene like a house deep in the forest away from everything..is like u are alone with nature hehe

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: Vantiel on 2015-12-18, 08:18:58

Nice mood & I like the lighting; reminds me of a forest I used to go to as a kid. =] At first glance a critique would be that I feel the textures/materials could use some refining; particularly the forest floor & near flora. There's a slight plastic appearance to the leaves, which is often apparent in Vue renders. Perhaps some bump/added thickness, and couple other tweaks would help.  Anyway, good scene!

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-12-18, 16:02:50

thnks vantiel for the critiques :)

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-12-18, 16:09:46

Just as idea quck collorgrading

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-12-18, 18:17:39

@nekro too much warm feeling in a cool place for my liking..I went for a dark coolness scene to highlight the essence of an building situated deep in the forest :)

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: FrostKiwi on 2015-12-19, 13:47:50

The green glow in the first render hurts the eyes a bit and in the lower right corner of the second render the bump seems to extreme (Image 1). Other than that, it looks really good.
I'm a fan of adding blue to nature scenes, so I'm really happy to see a render that screams colder colors and chill.
I hope you have enough time and horse power to crunch through the noise.

Title: Re: House in nature
Post by: sebastian___ on 2015-12-21, 10:37:34

Quote from: maru on 2015-12-17, 12:02:40

some brutal quick levels + hue saturation

Even if these adjustments kills some of the mood (arguably) the results are much more realistic, and the green hues are better / look more real.