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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: Giak111 on 2015-12-03, 17:17:54

Title: Bathroom relax
Post by: Giak111 on 2015-12-03, 17:17:54

Hello guys.
I am learning recently the use of Corona.
Any advice is welcome. Thank you.

Title: Re: Bathroom relax
Post by: maru on 2015-12-04, 13:38:58

Hi, I am moving it to WIP as I would really like to see it evolve as it has great potential!

Some notes:
-something could be added behind the window - I can imagine some vegetation - the leaves which would be closer to the frosted/steamy glass would appear sharper and get more blurry with distance
-textures: low res stains on the glass, more variation on stones
-models: the plant close to the camera (btw you could use Corona's DOF to blur it so that it wouldn't be so apparent that it's so lowpoly)
-the stones could be scattered, now it looks like displacement, which just looks wrong

Just a little bit more tweaking and I am sure it will be a masterpiece. :)

Title: Re: Bathroom relax
Post by: Giak111 on 2015-12-05, 19:34:18

thanks for your advice
I start to work to improve it immediately
thank you.