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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Art15 on 2015-10-29, 16:52:52

Title: Dinner Room
Post by: Art15 on 2015-10-29, 16:52:52

Hi everyone

Here is my latest project done with Modo and Corona
Criticism and comment are welcome.

(https://mir-cdn.behance.net/v1/rendition/project_modules/hd/02ce2230779267.56323e5f03b87.jpg)

(https://mir-cdn.behance.net/v1/rendition/project_modules/hd/71aaaa30779267.56323e5f04d71.jpg)

(https://mir-cdn.behance.net/v1/rendition/project_modules/hd/5dd15330779267.56323e5f062ad.jpg)

Title: Re: Dinner Room
Post by: maru on 2015-10-30, 17:13:54

Hi, I do not know why this thread gets so little attention. The images are really good. Simple, yet the shaders are nice and it has cozy atmosphere. Maybe there is some noise in the images, and the curtain material looks weird when viewed from above.

Title: Re: Dinner Room
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-10-30, 22:03:54

I will agree with Maru, images are good espacialy i like composition on the last image. Tho the materials could use some attention. Especialy wierd bump on the wooden surface of the table and leather on the chairs.

Title: Re: Dinner Room
Post by: Art15 on 2015-11-03, 15:26:57

Hello Maru and Nekrobul

Thank you for the comments.

The chair looks like it has a little bit of noise, but I think it's because of the bump texture. But I will give a better look at these details that you cited in the next job.

Regarding the curtain, you could give me a hint on how to do a better material, I can not do a good material for the curtains.

Have nice day
Arthur

Title: Re: Dinner Room
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-11-03, 15:54:52

Quote from: Art15 on 2015-11-03, 15:26:57

Hello Maru and Nekrobul

Thank you for the comments.

The chair looks like it has a little bit of noise, but I think it's because of the bump texture. But I will give a better look at these details that you cited in the next job.

Regarding the curtain, you could give me a hint on how to do a better material, I can not do a good material for the curtains.

Have nice day
Arthur

For the curtains try to use something like this
(https://nicolettalolli.files.wordpress.com/2013/11/bigstock-rough-canvas-background-20311721.jpg)
Mixed within a fallof map. But it all depend of what kind of curtains you are trying to replicate.

Title: Re: Dinner Room
Post by: Art15 on 2015-11-06, 14:36:27

Wow man, thank you!

I will work in the curtain material with this texture. Thank you!

Have nice day
Arthur