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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2015-10-28, 13:38:16

Title: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2015-10-28, 13:38:16

Hi all
This is my first real attemp with corona
Please tell me what do you think about it
SU: 3ds max, corona 1.3 RC1, PS
(https://www.flickr.com/photos/132383239@N03/22517494396/in/dateposted-public/)

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-10-28, 14:53:27

Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Alessandro on 2015-10-29, 08:04:12

It's not a bad start.
There is no deep in the image, no contrast, maybe too much light everywhere.
The reflection on the paint is too high, it seems a dark mirror, I can't understand if it is a mirror or a pain. Also try to add a little dof, just a little, it help to make it more realistic.

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: vkiuru on 2015-10-29, 08:40:09

It's a good start, but yeah you could improve it by adding more contrast between the elements :)

Quote from: Nekrobul on 2015-10-28, 14:53:27

Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.

Has the image in OP changed or are you commenting on the fact that no window pane is seen in the reflection? If it's the latter, what makes you think the window pane should be visible in the reflection? If it's a thick wall structure like in cold areas, the window panes are much further out.

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2015-10-29, 11:23:55

Thanks guys for your comment it realy helps Thanks

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Alessandro on 2015-10-29, 12:00:57

Quote from: Abderrahmen Ezzine on 2015-10-29, 11:23:55

Thanks guys for your comment it realy helps Thanks

Waiting for the improved release ;)

Title: Re: Corona render ft B&B chair
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-10-29, 15:00:53

Quote from: vkiuru on 2015-10-29, 08:40:09

It's a good start, but yeah you could improve it by adding more contrast between the elements :)

Quote from: Nekrobul on 2015-10-28, 14:53:27

Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.

Has the image in OP changed or are you commenting on the fact that no window pane is seen in the reflection? If it's the latter, what makes you think the window pane should be visible in the reflection? If it's a thick wall structure like in cold areas, the window panes are much further out.

I mean that the reflection somehoe looks wrong, like someone just cuted a couple of holes in the wall with a paper knife