house in the country

[chetib]

Hi everyone,

This is my first render made ​​with Corona. Thank you for your comments.

Thanks

[snakebox]

First of all, overall it looks good!

It does seem like the guy doesn't have any shadows?  Something doesn't seem right on the floor behind him..

[tomislavn]

Cute concept overall, good work. Just missing some depth, maybe some ambient occlusion - its a tad flat in my opinion. Could work a bit on the wood material also :)

[Image Box Studios]

hi...i have one suggestion...i think ceiling wooden beam are looking so heavy...

[tomislavn]

hi...i have one suggestion...i think ceiling wooden beam are looking so heavy...

Yeah kinda out of proportion a bit :)

[crazyman]

Funny:) chromatic aberration in first picture, found it's way to time stamp of yours :)

[chetib]

Thank you guys for all your comments. I take note and try to improve it. I apologize for my English! :)
tomislavn : I didn'tt make postprod. Just some color adjustment.

Thanks again

[tomislavn]

Thank you guys for all your comments. I take note and try to improve it. I apologize for my English! :)
tomislavn : I didn'tt make postprod. Just some color adjustment.

Thanks again

Aaah ok :) sorry, figured it was a finished version so it was just a little bit of constructive criticism. Nice work overall :)

[chetib]

Thank you tomislavn. still a lot of improvement!