Author Topic: Corona render ft B&B chair  (Read 3844 times)

2015-10-28, 13:38:16

Abderrahmen Ezzine

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Hi all
This is my first real attemp with corona
Please tell me what do you think about it
SU: 3ds max, corona 1.3 RC1, PS
« Last Edit: 2015-10-28, 13:43:55 by Abderrahmen Ezzine »

2015-10-28, 14:53:27
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Nekrobul

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Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.
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2015-10-29, 08:04:12
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It's not a bad start.
There is no deep in the image, no contrast, maybe too much light everywhere.
The reflection on the paint is too high, it seems a dark mirror, I can't understand if it is a mirror or a pain. Also try to add a little dof, just a little, it help to make it more realistic.
My Ducati or a render with Corona.....mmm, hard question!

2015-10-29, 08:40:09
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vkiuru

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It's a good start, but yeah you could improve it by adding more contrast between the elements :)

Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.

Has the image in OP changed or are you commenting on the fact that no window pane is seen in the reflection? If it's the latter, what makes you think the window pane should be visible in the reflection? If it's a thick wall structure like in cold areas, the window panes are much further out.

2015-10-29, 11:23:55
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Abderrahmen Ezzine

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Thanks guys for your comment it realy helps Thanks

2015-10-29, 12:00:57
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Alessandro

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Thanks guys for your comment it realy helps Thanks

Waiting for the improved release ;)
My Ducati or a render with Corona.....mmm, hard question!

2015-10-29, 15:00:53
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Nekrobul

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It's a good start, but yeah you could improve it by adding more contrast between the elements :)

Pay attention to detail.

There are no windows in the reflection on the painting.

Has the image in OP changed or are you commenting on the fact that no window pane is seen in the reflection? If it's the latter, what makes you think the window pane should be visible in the reflection? If it's a thick wall structure like in cold areas, the window panes are much further out.

I mean that the reflection somehoe looks wrong, like someone just cuted a couple of holes in the wall with a paper knife
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