Character Design Still- Feedback please (Cinema 4D)

[LittleHoudini]

Hi, I'm new on this forum and have been using Corona's Alpha release with C4d. Absolutely loving the render engine, minus the crashes with the 'Interactive Rendering'

I've been working on this piece below to try and improve my skills with the software, would love some constructive feedback that I can use for when I do my next piece this month.

Thanks!
Jack

[TomG]

Be sure to report crashes, with minidump - don't know if you have been, but wanted the reminder that the only way we can ever fix them is if they are reported :) https://help.c4d.corona-renderer.com/support/solutions/articles/12000033461-how-to-report-issues-