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Title: WIP Assistance
Post by: vicmds on 2019-06-05, 23:55:29

Hey, everyone!

Questionable composition and architecture aside (yes, this is an actual place), can anybody help me understand why I dislike this so much? Any direction on this shot's strengths and weaknesses would be quite appreciated. Thanks!

Title: Re: WIP Assistance
Post by: romullus on 2019-06-06, 09:45:28

I would change lighting, bright sun at noon, directly behind the camera, isn't good recipe for pleasing lighting. Also reflection on the front door doesn't match background at all. But overall, the work is not bad at all. Add more interesting lighting and composition and you will have pretty good viz.

Title: Re: WIP Assistance
Post by: vicmds on 2019-06-07, 23:10:32

Thank you! I sure needed the encouragement to change the lighting.

I'm working on a blue-ish hour shot and will bring and update soon. I noticed I tend to have a difficult time with bright sunny exteriors.

Oh, and it also took me an embarrassingly long time to notice Corona Triplanar doesn't go along with displace modifiers. Fixed that too.

Thanks for the feedback

Title: Re: WIP Assistance
Post by: Nejc Kilar on 2019-06-13, 17:59:29

Would be fun to see the revision :) Keep up the good work!

Title: Re: WIP Assistance
Post by: actrask on 2019-06-14, 00:13:14

Turn that porch light off, you think money grows on trees?? ;)
 
Looking forward to seeing the revisions as well :D

Title: Re: WIP Assistance
Post by: daveclive on 2019-08-07, 02:21:11

The model and scene is good.
Just need to work on your lighting man