The flash try

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

Hi all
I came today with an image i made super quicly inspired by Ned post yesterday, actualy all what i was doing is trying to recreate the same mood
I hope you like it and tell me what do you think about it
Thanks alot

Inspiration:


The flash try:

[Nekrobul]

Flashlight is not magic key to sucsess. It works only when the geomery and textures are done properly.

[romullus]

Cat's shadow should be sharp too.

[PROH]

To me it looks like there's something wrong with the scale of the different elements.

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

Hi all again and thanks alots fro your replys
@Nekrobul I'm confused by your comment because what i undrestand from it that i totaly missed my goal to mimic the mood on the reference image. If yes can you please tell me point by point all your observations so i can enhance my work  and thanks

@romullus Thank you, for making me notice it

@PROH i was using and 50 mm camera lens  so maybe because of that  because it flatten the perspective and thanks underlining it

[Nekrobul]

Hi all again and thanks alots fro your replys
@Nekrobul I'm confused by your comment because what i undrestand from it that i totaly missed my goal to mimic the mood on the reference image. If yes can you please tell me point by point all your observations so i can enhance my work  and thanks

@romullus Thank you, for making me notice it

@PROH i was using and 50 mm camera lens  so maybe because of that  because it flatten the perspective and thanks underlining it

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

@Nekrobul Huge THANKS  i realy apreciate your help

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

Here it's a wip after all Nekrobul notes so i hope i'm getting closer to the goal. if no so pls tell me  and Thanks alot

[romullus]

Some things looks little bit off scale. Electrical cord does nothing but distracts from main focus point. Some textures could be of higher quality.

Moving this topic to wip board.

[maru]

The leather material and the sofa looks good, but not the rest. The wall material looks like a pasted photo, if you want a structure like this, you should use proper bump maps so that it interacts with light the way it should.

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

Thanks alot guys, your comment makes me realy progress and thanks for  taking the time  replying.
@romullus i was thinking moving it by my self so thanks for doing it

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

Hello guys so i was working on that project and i wanted to share with you where i got so far .
here u will find an addditional image where i was testing the hair and fur with corona render .
Tell me what do you think about it and thanks

[maru]

Definitely better. Also +1... no... +5 to creepiness for the eyeless bunny!

[Loki_bg]

That is very nice and realistic :)i tried one flash with some test shaders and hdri with low intensity

[Abderrahmen Ezzine]

That is very nice and realistic :)i tried one flash with some test shaders and hdri with low intensity

Thanks alot you too Nicely done but if u can add some bump to the black plastic shader just a little bit, it looks super perfect that's why