- Fix the bed cover UV's and that black thing on top of it. Also bed cover is like 0 bump? Could it be done something to it?
- Lamp shade transparency is weird. Is it intentional to see light bulb? I expect it to be barely visible and have no sharp edges.
- Does black elements material on square column changes from render to render? It does feel like two different to me.
- Ceiling is pretty "busy" but it's is only my feeling.
- Second render "begging" for more light sources rather just portals. It does feel pretty dead for now.
Otherwise you getting there :)