Chaos Corona Forum
General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Tiago4D on 2014-04-21, 10:33:13
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Hi guys! my life is other, corona is the best!
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(http://snag.gy/Fap7r.jpg)
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Not too bad, but there is much to improve. Water in pool looks like frozen, it badly needs some refraction. Concrete material is way too reflective and too glosy. There's white border around background - bad photoshop work? Background image itself is pretty bad quality and rather lowres. It looks more like poster glued to windows, than actual enviroment.
And there's something wrong with geometry of window openings. See attached image.
I think, you shoud've stay in wip section a little bit longer and finish this work properly.
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Hi Romulus!
here is the new image
thanks for your comments
I try a new render, but, is not a perfect scene
hug!
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Looks nice, but those foot prints even tho they look good need more drops around them. People dont just leave wet foot stains right after they go out of water, If that person used a towel etc. then the drops needs to be thicker.
Your envirowment looks too sharp, try adding a bit of dof and glow, Other than that looks really nice.
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This was already mention, but the wall on the left isnt straight around the openings. Look at the picture. The walls should follow the blue lines.
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This was already mention, but the wall on the left isnt straight around the openings. Look at the picture. The walls should follow the blue lines.
Your perspective is false, you are assuming that the roof is parallel to the ground which is not the case.
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This was already mention, but the wall on the left isnt straight around the openings. Look at the picture. The walls should follow the blue lines.
Your perspective is false, you are assuming that the roof is parallel to the ground which is not the case.
Camera matched from just the floor and walls.
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Hi Guys
Here is the ref image
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/t1.0-9/1013824_750132321686039_4183763174640715934_n.jpg)
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Hi Guys
Here is the ref image
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/t1.0-9/1013824_750132321686039_4183763174640715934_n.jpg)
Very Good ...! Compliment
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Tell me.. why pool edge is wrapped in plastic foil, and why this plastic is peeling off?
Everything else is very satisfactory.
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Over the years architects have gone to great lengths to photograph scenes without people
I hate people in scenes -
I have to say in this instance you have done a good job and it looks plausible but I am afraid it does nothing for this image.
I think your image is really nice -
I agree re: the water edge - looks like cling film not water lapping at the edge.
Having designed a few pools with level deck drainage i can tell you the water edge is rarely that ragged.
please see reference image here https://www.dropbox.com/s/el8pkw9v94hb9cf/05.jpg
this is real world and you can see where the tile is wet and where it is dry beyond the drainage channel.
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Hi Guys
Here is the ref image
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/t1.0-9/1013824_750132321686039_4183763174640715934_n.jpg)
That is the reference image you can find here, http://www.archdaily.com/484458/the-hill-cork-house-contaminar-arquitectos/531a685ec07a80688c000265_the-hill-cork-house-contaminar-arquitectos_31-jpg/
Look further up for his renders.
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Its nice that you pointed that you, but OP, already mencioned that its ref image.