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Messages - Abderrahmen Ezzine

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Gallery / Re: Casual Bathroom
« on: 2016-07-02, 09:17:28 »
Really clean and easy to understand. Definitely a good archViz render.
Really awesome play with light, the light streak in the top is an excellent addition.

Personal gripes are... the bin?
If it even is one. Maybe I don't get new design, but the bin does not have a floor. So you drop your trash on the floor? :D

Next is the snow in the window.
You don't get exactly to have context about what it is. I promise some client will think it's dirt or a paper / tape mark. If it is winter and this is snow, show it in the window. If you leave the Window overexposed, like most archviz renders, it lacks context to visually explain what it is.

Lastly, actually a thing that caught me off guard one time:
The tile edges are just a repeat of the tile texture. Usually in real life there is a white "stick" of ceramic / metal or the ceramic rounded edge of the tile, definitely not a tile cutoff. This is a major part in choosing tiles and something that a client, who just concerned himself with tiles will notice.
Ugly reference photos from google. Ref1 Ref2

Otherwise, really great!

Thanks alot for your comment , I'm super glad that you like it and here are the answers for your notes
1- About the bin, i just picked what seems to me to be pleasant to see in the image. Sure they will need one in the bathroom but i join myself to you, the one i put in  there, is useless unless if we put some kind of plastic bag in it .
2- You are absolutely right about the context  add, for me i just chosed to put some confusing thing that you don't realy know what is it but it's there and it matches the lightning mood 
Need some more work in there  Thanks for making me notice it
3-Yeaaah, and i was wondering there was some thing missing with the tile and i didn't figure it out

I realy appreciate your comment ,thanks alot you can't imagine how pleasent it was to read
Thanks again

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Gallery / Casual Bathroom
« on: 2016-06-30, 11:53:57 »
Hi all This is my latest personal project and i would love to know what do you think about it
So please feel free to comment

Su: 3dsmax, corona and photoshop

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-04-12, 15:23:56 »
That is very nice and realistic :)i tried one flash with some test shaders and hdri with low intensity

Thanks alot you too Nicely done but if u can add some bump to the black plastic shader just a little bit, it looks super perfect that's why

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Gallery / The Farm
« on: 2016-04-06, 22:36:54 »
Hello guys today i want share with you a little ambiance study done with corona
I  realy apreciate your comment  so tell me please what do u think about it
The corona feature used here are the fog and the layred material and shadow catcher
As usual 3ds max, Corona 1.3 and Photoshop
Attached the raw render and the retouched version


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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-04-05, 16:44:02 »
Hello guys so i was working on that project and i wanted to share with you where i got so far .
here u will find an addditional image where i was testing the hair and fur with corona render .
Tell me what do you think about it and thanks


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Gallery / Re: Primrose Hill - Animation & Stills
« on: 2016-04-04, 20:11:01 »
Realy nice Work well done !! my questions are
What's your work flow softs and what are the specs of ur work station so i can compare and have a predictible time ?
Thanks alot

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-04-01, 14:34:33 »
Thanks alot guys, your comment makes me realy progress and thanks for  taking the time  replying.
@romullus i was thinking moving it by my self so thanks for doing it

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-04-01, 00:29:53 »
Here it's a wip after all Nekrobul notes so i hope i'm getting closer to the goal. if no so pls tell me  and Thanks alot

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-03-25, 14:45:26 »
@Nekrobul Huge THANKS  i realy apreciate your help

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: The flash try
« on: 2016-03-25, 14:20:09 »
Hi all again and thanks alots fro your replys
@Nekrobul I'm confused by your comment because what i undrestand from it that i totaly missed my goal to mimic the mood on the reference image. If yes can you please tell me point by point all your observations so i can enhance my work  and thanks

@romullus Thank you, for making me notice it

@PROH i was using and 50 mm camera lens  so maybe because of that  because it flatten the perspective and thanks underlining it

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Work in Progress/Tests / Re: trying to build up a scene
« on: 2016-03-23, 23:23:08 »
No words to say , super work i'm just speechless

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Work in Progress/Tests / The flash try
« on: 2016-03-23, 15:18:38 »
Hi all
I came today with an image i made super quicly inspired by Ned post yesterday, actualy all what i was doing is trying to recreate the same mood
I hope you like it and tell me what do you think about it
Thanks alot

Inspiration:


The flash try:

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Gallery / Re: The teapot fun
« on: 2016-03-17, 17:47:28 »
Thanks alot for your coment, and i just checked the file. Actualy i put alot of subdvisions in the teapot so the bottom was curved so it's not floating but it looks like it is

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Gallery / The teapot fun
« on: 2016-03-17, 15:28:34 »
Hi guys i'm here today to post a super small personal project testing some assets and my machine  render times.
The main work was about creating the material of the teapot, the depth off field effect  and the hdri lightening.
I used 3ds max, Corona 1.3 and Ps
The render times to get a nice result was about 250 passes wich it's converted to about 2 hours but i let it keep going until 8 hours.It was around 1000 passes
my Machine specs if u want to know 
i7: 4700 mq (yes it's a laptop)
Ram 16go
Video GT 750 m
I hope u like it and Tell me what do you think about it 
Thanks alot

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Gallery / Re: Some renders
« on: 2015-12-11, 23:52:16 »
Awesome Work

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