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Samurai Pizza Cat:
Hi there.

Started and finished my first interior scene today, as always C&C are welcomed to help improve the scene :)

Rendering time was 30 min.

Ludvik Koutny:
I don't think exterior matches very well...  perhaps you could try to put some card with tree silhouette between the sun and interior, so it casts shadows of branches into the room. And also, there should not be any burned out solid black holes in background ;)

There is quite a few pictures floating around on google images, so you could try to find one that would match better ;)

https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#q=forest+sunrise&um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbm=isch&source=lnt&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&sa=X&ei=zi-UUK22IYjj4QTHqIHYDA&ved=0CCEQpwUoBA&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=42feed12e8978950&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965

https://www.google.cz/search?q=forest+sunset&sugexp=chrome,mod%3D0&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=uS-UULytD6mh4gTEnoGoCg&biw=1920&bih=965&sei=ui-UUJe6LMqi4gTk24DQBQ#um=1&hl=en&safe=off&tbs=isz:lt,islt:2mp&tbm=isch&q=forest+sunset&revid=1720307894&sa=X&ei=1S-UUKzXFdHZ4QS5iYD4CQ&ved=0CEEQgxY&bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.r_cp.r_qf.&fp=7933f3e058529937&bpcl=37189454&biw=1920&bih=965

maru:
I like it, it has this strange feeling of waking up in a secluded house in the middle of a forest. :) The only thing I don't like is that greyish underexposed upper left corner. If it was meant to be something like a vignette, you should have used different blending mode.

Samurai Pizza Cat:
I agree with the background and light cookies.

Yeah it´s supposed to be a vignette... Man, I guess I´ve been staring at the scene for to long now  :D

Thanks you two.

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