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vicmds:
Hey, everyone!

Questionable composition and architecture aside (yes, this is an actual place), can anybody help me understand why I dislike this so much? Any direction on this shot's strengths and weaknesses would be quite appreciated. Thanks!

romullus:
I would change lighting, bright sun at noon, directly behind the camera, isn't good recipe for pleasing lighting. Also reflection on the front door doesn't match background at all. But overall, the work is not bad at all. Add more interesting lighting and composition and you will have pretty good viz.

vicmds:
Thank you! I sure needed the encouragement to change the lighting.

I'm working on a blue-ish hour shot and will bring and update soon. I noticed I tend to have a difficult time with bright sunny exteriors.

Oh, and it also took me an embarrassingly long time to notice Corona Triplanar doesn't go along with displace modifiers. Fixed that too.

Thanks for the feedback

Nejc Kilar:
Would be fun to see the revision :) Keep up the good work!

actrask:
Turn that porch light off, you think money grows on trees?? ;)
 
Looking forward to seeing the revisions as well :D

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