Are you stuck with having to show the radiator and UPVC-look windows on the far wall? I'd just say that the style of these is inconsistent with the interior design.
It may be client-led and not your decision to make at all.
I do like the materials on the bedding and it generally seems detailed well. I think the velvet material works well and the carpet does look like one of the better hair-based versions out there.
There's a couple of cloth objects intersecting with other geometry (pillow in headboard and curtain in wall).
I reckon that tray loaded with pitcher and glasses would make more of an impression in the throw it's sitting on.
Sorry, that came across as mostly criticism! I do think they have a good feel to them overall.
