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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: divistudio on 2015-05-08, 12:28:27

Title: Artist's house
Post by: divistudio on 2015-05-08, 12:28:27
Artist's house. 3d visialization project.
Fixed
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: fLuppster on 2015-05-08, 12:54:21
The architecture looks really great, but the vegetation could need a bit more love.
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: Freakaz on 2015-05-08, 13:56:09
Nice and pleasant color balance. The grass could be more realistic and random, as fLuppster said. It looks more like a carpet at the moment and the line between the sky and the roof is jagged.
From my point of view: The balustrade on the 2nd floor windows is to "heavy" You're using frameless glass and kill all the lightness of it with massive louvers, imho it's unnecessary.  The rounded top of the fence also "falls out". House has strict forms, sharp corners and suddenly there's that rounded fence top out of nowhere :/
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: divistudio on 2015-05-08, 14:02:44
Thank you! As for the grass - I agree. As for the architecture and the fence - this does not matter to me. I renderer, not the architect. Thank you for your constructive comments
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: Adi on 2015-05-08, 17:50:01
I love the overall image , great looking house and atmosphere.
I think you could add a subtle bump to the glass as a nice detail.
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: dartofang on 2015-05-11, 10:35:22
i want to swim in the pool... :)
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: ska on 2015-05-11, 14:44:42
Very nice image. Grass looks good to me,fine and tidy grass :)
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Post by: dia on 2015-05-12, 10:50:51
Nice work. Great mood and good lightning.
/DIA
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: Alex Abarca on 2015-05-13, 04:01:23
looks great but i can see the cutout...try defringe command in photoshop and should remove the black border.
Title: Re: Artist's house
Post by: Gr100 on 2015-06-19, 20:22:20
Thank you! As for the grass - I agree. As for the architecture and the fence - this does not matter to me. I renderer, not the architect. Thank you for your constructive comments

Superb and inspiring work, and I compltely agree with you, most of us aren't designers on all projects, we are simply copying what's on that blueprint. Great work