Author Topic: Dining  (Read 4476 times)

2016-04-06, 18:20:45

Aokhoacden

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Hi guys,
Here is one view in my most recent work,
I hope you like it :)

2016-04-06, 18:42:50
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leocv

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Very nice work! :)

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Leo.
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2016-04-07, 14:52:58
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Aokhoacden

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Thanks Leo :D

2016-04-07, 15:22:08
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Really nice.
Nitpicks being the IMO overdone sharpening. It creates strong sharpening artifacts on the lamp and makes the image look what people discribe as "Computery". The ceiling lamps are just white, a simple half sphere with mirror material would boost the realism.
Also this is totally taste, room is too clean to be photo real. Floor and right cupboard need to have a small amount of dirt in reflective slot. Like the awesome car dirt, thats barely visible form here:
https://corona-renderer.com/homepage/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/BMW4-by-Ludvik-Koutny-And-ProgressiveFX.jpg

edit: A ceiling lamp that close to the window seems odd as an architecture choise. But I don't understand shit about architecture so feel free to ignore :D
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2016-04-07, 15:24:49
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You should put that link in to your signature, me think ;]
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2016-04-07, 15:26:01
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You should put that link in to your signature, me think ;]
Ye^^ It's just that good of a dirt example.
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2016-04-09, 05:07:28
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Aokhoacden

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Really nice.
Nitpicks being the IMO overdone sharpening. It creates strong sharpening artifacts on the lamp and makes the image look what people discribe as "Computery". The ceiling lamps are just white, a simple half sphere with mirror material would boost the realism.
Also this is totally taste, room is too clean to be photo real. Floor and right cupboard need to have a small amount of dirt in reflective slot. Like the awesome car dirt, thats barely visible form here:
https://corona-renderer.com/homepage/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/BMW4-by-Ludvik-Koutny-And-ProgressiveFX.jpg

edit: A ceiling lamp that close to the window seems odd as an architecture choise. But I don't understand shit about architecture so feel free to ignore :D
Thanks your comment Saires, I would change a few things :)