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daniel.:
I tried to make a new version. I chamfered the edges more. scaled the plant down. Some new colors. But in general there is not much change. Really don't know what to do. Like I said the Kitchen should look new and clean. What do you guys think about the backround? maybe that is wrong? or something else?

BardhylM:
I do not think you are far from achieving what you intended, just probably your eyes have gotten used on this ambient (that is I assume why you've started the thread, for a new perspective).

What I can suggest is the "outsides" in the windows should look overexposed normally, but you can fake it in the way you used backdrops. I just think it is too dark, things inside are brighter
than outside. Keep it but just make it brighter to a point where you can still make out what is it (the backdrop landscape).

The reference attached, I just edited a little the contrast and made it just a tad bit darker overall cause for me it looks just a little overexposed.
The chairs maybe need a turbosmooth, and try adding a light that lights only the chairs for a defining the shapes more maybe.  And try croping a little the empty space that is on the tiles, maybe push the carpet a little toward the kitchen.

Hope these suggestions help you in any way, and good luck to you!

daniel.:
Thank you so much! The chair is a model I downloaded for free just to test wooden chairs as an alternative to the blue ones. I will buy/make another chair model, but I don't know yet which chair exactly I want. I tried to correct exposure a little.

Also, I need the picture in DIN and 16:9 format. Maybe I should try some other furniture in the foreground for DIN format version.

BardhylM:
Nothing man, hope it helps.
Yes, you can pull the chairs and add a layout complete with a table in foreground, not sure in the matter of pointing the attention to the table and removing it from the kitchen.
You can experiment with it if you want to keep that ratio. Just put the intended models and it should help if you decide in design and know that you wont be changing again.

CJRenders:
are you using multipasses? I think some darker shadows would help a ton

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