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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: maru on 2013-03-06, 23:14:39

Title: FED5B - c&c please
Post by: maru on 2013-03-06, 23:14:39

Here's my latest render. I'd like to hear some criticism to make it as good as it can be. What would you change? What looks good, what looks bad? Any suggestions? Tips on composition?

Title: Re: FED5B - c&c please
Post by: helge75 on 2013-03-07, 06:29:38

You need to put a hdri environment, and from the front at an angle of one light.Sorry for my English.

Title: Re: FED5B - c&c please
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2013-03-07, 08:16:10

Also, metals should have some structure... 

Title: Re: FED5B - c&c please
Post by: Polymax on 2013-03-07, 08:25:50

To another view, the view like from the bottom. You can still put other objects next to or behind the camera and of course DOF :)
Also there is an error in the smoothing of the model.

Title: Re: FED5B - c&c please
Post by: maru on 2013-03-07, 15:20:02

Thanks for the replies! I will try to fix all the issues and find some nice HDRI environment. The metal has a subtle bump map, but you are right, it's too subtle. ;) I'm not very good at modelling, always have trouble with chamfering edges and polys.