Author Topic: Remembering my younger days  (Read 5143 times)

2015-04-27, 13:33:51

bryanwrx

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Old project that I remake in corona renderer for testing..with some greeneries improvements :)

2015-04-27, 15:01:28
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spadestick

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interesting! Is everything rendered or some items are photos? those lamposts are not dirty or intergrated enough to be part of the scene...

2015-04-27, 15:10:48
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bryanwrx

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Hey spadestick thnks for the feedback!..About the image everything is 3d except the kids and the background mountain :)..

2015-05-10, 16:03:23
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bryanwrx

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Some updates..change the mood..so far I like it :)

2015-05-11, 11:31:13
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Nice image. I like it too, but few things still bugging me.

1. wires on electrical poles hanging in a unrealistic way. Look at attached image, yours hanging like in A example, while in real world they looks like in B example.
2. tree on right looks a bit odd. Those extremely long and thin branches doesn't look very convincing
3. kids are rather poor integrated. At least some contact shadow is needed.
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2015-05-11, 11:33:50
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2015-05-11, 16:08:04
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bryanwrx

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Hey thnks for the feedback.

For the pole I have two meeting point for the wires..so option B is not possible. Look at the image..or I need to change it to one meeting point.
Yes the trees i'm working on it..pain in the ass
And the kids i'm thinking about to find a better one..time will tell


2015-05-11, 20:36:03
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Option B is the way to do it.  If you have two meeting points, just add another vertex to your spline and make them bezier corners, like option C.
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2015-05-11, 22:04:48
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Thats what I did..(see pic). I did it the same as option C for the top one. Bottom one I still need to fix it.

2015-05-12, 22:41:33
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danielmn

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great job on the image all the textures look really great.

I woul only add some more detail to the surface where the ground meet either adding more bump or adding more rock and such.  Looks a little flat and you can see the subtle fade of road to dirt.

check this image see how parts transition to each other http://images.singletracks.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/name-that-trail-1024x768.jpg
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2015-05-12, 23:30:33
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bryanwrx

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Thnks Daniel. the subtle fade of road to dirt that's what i wanted to achieve..u can even see some tire dirt marks on the road. So like a really old and worn out road that broke off from environment effect (rain, cars),
maybe Ill add more rocks. it all depends what sort of sand road u want. Theirs different types, but thnks for the feedback :)