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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: bryanwrx on 2015-04-27, 13:33:51

Title: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-04-27, 13:33:51

Old project that I remake in corona renderer for testing..with some greeneries improvements :)

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: spadestick on 2015-04-27, 15:01:28

interesting! Is everything rendered or some items are photos? those lamposts are not dirty or intergrated enough to be part of the scene...

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-04-27, 15:10:48

Hey spadestick thnks for the feedback!..About the image everything is 3d except the kids and the background mountain :)..

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-05-10, 16:03:23

Some updates..change the mood..so far I like it :)

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: romullus on 2015-05-11, 11:31:13

Nice image. I like it too, but few things still bugging me.

1. wires on electrical poles hanging in a unrealistic way. Look at attached image, yours hanging like in A example, while in real world they looks like in B example.
2. tree on right looks a bit odd. Those extremely long and thin branches doesn't look very convincing
3. kids are rather poor integrated. At least some contact shadow is needed.

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: Ondra on 2015-05-11, 11:33:50

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Catenary#Mathematical_description ;)

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-05-11, 16:08:04

Hey thnks for the feedback.

For the pole I have two meeting point for the wires..so option B is not possible. Look at the image..or I need to change it to one meeting point.
Yes the trees i'm working on it..pain in the ass
And the kids i'm thinking about to find a better one..time will tell

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: nauticus25 on 2015-05-11, 20:36:03

Option B is the way to do it.  If you have two meeting points, just add another vertex to your spline and make them bezier corners, like option C.

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-05-11, 22:04:48

Thats what I did..(see pic). I did it the same as option C for the top one. Bottom one I still need to fix it.

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: danielmn on 2015-05-12, 22:41:33

great job on the image all the textures look really great.

I woul only add some more detail to the surface where the ground meet either adding more bump or adding more rock and such.  Looks a little flat and you can see the subtle fade of road to dirt.

check this image see how parts transition to each other http://images.singletracks.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/name-that-trail-1024x768.jpg

Title: Re: Remembering my younger days
Post by: bryanwrx on 2015-05-12, 23:30:33

Thnks Daniel. the subtle fade of road to dirt that's what i wanted to achieve..u can even see some tire dirt marks on the road. So like a really old and worn out road that broke off from environment effect (rain, cars),
maybe Ill add more rocks. it all depends what sort of sand road u want. Theirs different types, but thnks for the feedback :)