Author Topic: Summer house  (Read 3521 times)

2015-08-11, 00:55:02

Emilia R

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Hi guys this is my firs work here, so what do you think? Any critique or advices appreciated.

2015-08-11, 11:37:22
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maru

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Very very nice. I love the color grading as it's not overdone.
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2015-08-11, 14:53:43
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spadestick

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fantastic job on the house, yes, good colour grading, but personally a little more black would be nice as it seems a little faded in parts. The tree leaves in the 2 foreground trees give the scene away. What happens if you remove the 2 front trees altogether? the foreground bush is looking great, much better than the trees. I guess the trees look a little too CG, either by modelling or texturing. Or maybe move the camera in so you do see the trees but still have the shadows?

2015-08-12, 14:31:41
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ska

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my opinion:
+50 to saturation = PERFECT!

btw great mood!

2015-08-12, 16:09:33
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top i think is perfect

2015-08-24, 21:55:04
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perfect image! exteriors are getting better and better
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