Modern Interior

[Ondra]

This is not a hugbox community. When you post here, you have to be ready to accept criticism (as long as it is constructive and polite). You should not fight criticism, but learn from it.

I've deleted your personal insult. One more and tempbans will start rolling.

[vogor]

If someone starts to aggressively impose their views then I am ready to explain it to him at his level that he is wrong.

[vogor]

[Image Box Studios]

hi.....you have to work on shaders and textures....when you are master in texturing and shading, lighting is not a big issue at that time..keep it up.

thanks for the advice but judging by your portfolio in this practice in most need you

Yes you are right. and i do agree that i am not a master in texturing and shading. but why we post our images here? and the answer is that peoples give us comments and feedback on our works. so it is my humble request to you that please be positive on any forum and should respect others comments.

Thanks.

[Image Box Studios]

hi.....you have to work on shaders and textures....when you are master in texturing and shading, lighting is not a big issue at that time..keep it up.

thanks for the advice but judging by your portfolio in this practice in most need you

He was giving you his honest advice, with which I happen to agree. It is constructive criticism, you should be thankful, intead of trying to "attack" his work. He has a good portfolio, better than the images you have been showing here, so show a little respect.

Hi gerbilho...Thanks for your words.

[Nekrobul]

I think that the problem in your vizualizations is not the shaders and lighting, the problem is in atmospherics.

Those images doesent look tasty, like i want to be there or i want to by it.

For example

http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4621-ouverture-i-x.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4824-scandinavian-interior.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4977-bedroom.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/5220-project-dautzenberg.html

Here u can feel the light difusing in the room u can feel the air inside the room. Try to think what your works miss and this works have.

[Ludvik Koutny]

Well, the main problem is that they are simply too dark. Blacks are completely black. I have already said it once and will repeat myself. I think he should calibrate his monitor or get a better one. I really do not believe he sees the same brightness and contrast of his images as we see.

[Sportler]

I think that the problem in your vizualizations is not the shaders and lighting, the problem is in atmospherics.

Those images doesent look tasty, like i want to be there or i want to by it.

For example

http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4621-ouverture-i-x.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4824-scandinavian-interior.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/4977-bedroom.html
http://www.ronenbekerman.com/forums/finished-work/5220-project-dautzenberg.html

Here u can feel the light difusing in the room u can feel the air inside the room. Try to think what your works miss and this works have.

I completely agree with this statement. They lack the punch that give them a personality and atmosphere. Currently they look generic and not really very, well, interesting. This could relate to monitor calibration of course, but still. Feels a little extreme if that is the only issue.

Anyway, keep posting and keep improving! Also, remember that C&C is one of your most valuable tools to do just so, as it will feed your brain with more information to consider while planning, sketching, modeling, texturing, shading, lighting, composing and post processing your work!

Have a nice day!

[Nekrobul]

Well, the main problem is that they are simply too dark. Blacks are completely black. I have already said it once and will repeat myself. I think he should calibrate his monitor or get a better one. I really do not believe he sees the same brightness and contrast of his images as we see.

Yes probably you are right, i alway work on two PC's with two different monitors. One old samsung i got from home along with my PC and second is DELL (don't actualy remember the model) but thats not the point.

The point is that i always have to re ajust lithing and sometimes materials to achive same result a made couple of minutes before on old monitor.

[vogor]

[vogor]

[romullus]

Is Huayra's poster, screenshot from pcars? Looks very familiar.

[vogor]

[kehaola]

Isn't it difficult to go to the desk and sit down or stand up? People will hit their head to the ceiling no matter what.

The scene needs much more detail and atmosphere. Overall all the images look too dark, compositions need some love as well as design choices.

Keep it up!

[rafpug]

Hello vogor

Is possible to know (one such example) settings rendering? and rendering time ?
The type and setting of the lights ?

Thanks
R