Nice attempt, but...
1&2 - Lighting doesn't fit (observe how light falls over the object and where the lights sources are in the image) - also take care of reflections, know the surface planes have.
3 - Scale is off (take warehouse elements in relation to the plane's elements - seems quite a small plane ;)
4 - That background, can you recognize the perspective - either clouds are off or the plane is flying extremely sideways... wouldn't wanna be on :D
Disregard my comment, if you can't see it... but keep up the spirit!
