Bachelor project + animation

[patrickdrescher]

Hey guys,

this is the final project for my bachelor degree in architecture.
I designed an advertising agency in the city of Oldenburg, Germany.
For the final presentation I also made a little animation (my first ever!)

I really hope you like it and I would love to hear some feedback from you :)

https://www.behance.net/gallery/54437927/Advertising-agency

[Art15]

The animation is cool!

Maybe if you improved the water would look better

[ska]

great work, u deserve 10!

[Image Box Studios]

Very nice and flicker free animation. I like the water scene most.

[patrickdrescher]

The animation is cool!

Maybe if you improved the water would look better

Thank you! What would you suggest to improve in terms of water? More refraction, another texture, more or less noise? I was struggeling to animate the water properly.

great work, u deserve 10!

Thank you :)

Very nice and flicker free animation. I like the water scene most.

Thanks a lot!

[Bzuco]

For indoor water it will be better if the surface will be almost flat...maybe with one big circular ripple ( someone threw a coin into the water, or leaf fell to the water)
indoor/outdoor water surface:
http://www.freshpalace.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Modern-Home-Bielefeld-Germany-Kitchen-Water-Feature.jpg
http://beautyharmonylife.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/04/modern-indoor-water-feature.jpg
http://bishko.org/com_e/hotel_sharon/slides/03-%20Hotel%20Sharon%20Spa%20Center%20-%20Heated%20indoor%20salt-water%20pool%20-%20Fitness%20and%20training%20center.jpg

Your water material is probably correct, it only depends on what is under the water surface (pool wall color) and what the water surface reflect (angle of camera). You can adjust absorption color and distance if you want non clean water.

[Art15]

I agree with Bzuco. The water inside would have to be a "calm water" almost flat. These ripples that you have made look almost like a sea water, very shaky.

On the material of the water, I believe that if you improve the absorption will get even better.

[patrickdrescher]

For indoor water it will be better if the surface will be almost flat...maybe with one big circular ripple ( someone threw a coin into the water, or leaf fell to the water)
indoor/outdoor water surface:
http://www.freshpalace.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Modern-Home-Bielefeld-Germany-Kitchen-Water-Feature.jpg
http://beautyharmonylife.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/04/modern-indoor-water-feature.jpg
http://bishko.org/com_e/hotel_sharon/slides/03-%20Hotel%20Sharon%20Spa%20Center%20-%20Heated%20indoor%20salt-water%20pool%20-%20Fitness%20and%20training%20center.jpg

Your water material is probably correct, it only depends on what is under the water surface (pool wall color) and what the water surface reflect (angle of camera). You can adjust absorption color and distance if you want non clean water.

I agree with Bzuco. The water inside would have to be a "calm water" almost flat. These ripples that you have made look almost like a sea water, very shaky.

On the material of the water, I believe that if you improve the absorption will get even better.

You two are absolutely right. The waves are way to strong for an indoor water surface.
I think it looks nice in the animation, but for indoors it doesnt seem realistic.

I will definitely try absorption in that water material. Thanks!