Not a bad start at all. clean and good shapes.
Love the ceiling!
I think though that its too dark.. the blacks seem too crushed to me, and the placement of the clock above the kitchen seems a little ambitious?
I understand the modern style of having rough walls, big paintings and bicycles in images, but I don't think it works particularly well in kitchen scenes. Might just be me but I find it odd.
If you are after a heavy contrast look, I would consider picking some bar stools that are a bit lighter to break up the big dark foreground a little, maybe white legs or seats.
There is also something odd about the water bottle and book? box? can't tell what it is, that seems to break the overall clean black/white look. I would even go as far as to say, either keep the apples OR the lemons/citrus.
Overall it looks very crisp and sharp, and the camera angle works pretty well too.