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2014-08-31, 18:38:16

pmcf1981

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hi guys ....

this is my last project (test)


hope you like .. :)


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2014-09-01, 03:15:42
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snakebox

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Not a bad start at all. clean and good shapes. 

Love the ceiling!

I think though that its too dark.. the blacks seem too crushed to me, and the placement of the clock above the kitchen seems a little ambitious?

I understand the modern style of having rough walls, big paintings and bicycles in images, but I don't think it works particularly well in kitchen scenes. Might just be me but I find it odd.
If you are after a heavy contrast look, I would consider picking some bar stools that are a bit lighter to break up the big dark foreground a little, maybe white legs or seats.

There is also something odd about the water bottle and book? box? can't tell what it is, that seems to break the overall clean black/white look. I would even go as far as to say, either keep the apples OR the lemons/citrus.

Overall it looks very crisp and sharp, and the camera angle works pretty well too.

2014-09-01, 09:30:26
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What worries me most, it's amount of jaggies. They're everywhere! Did you touch image filtering settings?
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2014-09-01, 11:00:54
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pmcf1981

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snakebox ... thanks for the comment and critique :) you are correct :)
, but the idea and a completely differentkitchen in a different environment.
this was a test I wanted to do with light entering from above, and the stools are crazy i now: P


romullus, i use photoshop to add same sharp and created some jaggies and the filter is on 1,333, were gona try adding more light is to dark, like snakebox tell ..

need some help :)

snakebox is not a book lol, is cereal box :)

thks a lot :) guys

« Last Edit: 2014-09-01, 11:43:20 by pmcf1981 »

2014-09-02, 07:57:39
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Lookin' gooood :) nice render!
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2014-09-02, 10:16:55
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pmcf1981

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thks a lot tomislavn :)

2014-09-02, 13:09:55
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crazyman

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hi guys ....

this is my last project (test)

...

are you leaving us? :)

2014-09-02, 13:38:13
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hi guys ....

this is my last project (test)

...

are you leaving us? :)

*insert random troll-face here* :D
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2014-09-02, 14:32:34
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pmcf1981

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no lol ....

latest project.. sorry my english ... :)