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2015-12-27, 16:37:11

kuch

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Small single-family home project)

2015-12-27, 18:45:55
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neox00

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hello
just a little bit noise , but great job also i didn't like the trees in the back , well that's my opinion
also i would like to see your raw render since i am willing to achieve such a strong contrasted day lightning it would be very helpful to me to see what kind of postproduction you did
keep up the good work !


2015-12-29, 10:37:16
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kuch

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hello
just a little bit noise , but great job also i didn't like the trees in the back , well that's my opinion
also i would like to see your raw render since i am willing to achieve such a strong contrasted day lightning it would be very helpful to me to see what kind of postproduction you did
keep up the good work !

my raw render!)

2015-12-29, 10:38:18
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kuch

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interior

2016-01-04, 13:23:00
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Adi

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Here's some stuff that bother me the most:

-maybe i'm wrong but it looks like you changed the background sky ( white edges around the trees) .
-grass looks a bit too light
-modern architecture , building looks fine but i dont like the "old school" wooden fence in the back.
-noticeable tiling of the textures. i also dont like the texture of pool tiles

This is my opinion , I hope it will help you improve suff in your work. Good luck :)