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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: kuch on 2015-12-27, 16:37:11

Title: House
Post by: kuch on 2015-12-27, 16:37:11

Small single-family home project)

Title: Re: House
Post by: neox00 on 2015-12-27, 18:45:55

hello
just a little bit noise , but great job also i didn't like the trees in the back , well that's my opinion
also i would like to see your raw render since i am willing to achieve such a strong contrasted day lightning it would be very helpful to me to see what kind of postproduction you did
keep up the good work !

Title: Re: House
Post by: kuch on 2015-12-29, 10:37:16

Quote from: neox00 on 2015-12-27, 18:45:55

hello
just a little bit noise , but great job also i didn't like the trees in the back , well that's my opinion
also i would like to see your raw render since i am willing to achieve such a strong contrasted day lightning it would be very helpful to me to see what kind of postproduction you did
keep up the good work !

my raw render!)

Title: Re: House
Post by: kuch on 2015-12-29, 10:38:18

interior

Title: Re: House
Post by: Adi on 2016-01-04, 13:23:00

Here's some stuff that bother me the most:

-maybe i'm wrong but it looks like you changed the background sky ( white edges around the trees) .
-grass looks a bit too light
-modern architecture , building looks fine but i dont like the "old school" wooden fence in the back.
-noticeable tiling of the textures. i also dont like the texture of pool tiles

This is my opinion , I hope it will help you improve suff in your work. Good luck :)