Woods Cabin

[diogovb]

Hi, guys, I'm finishing a project here and I would really appreciate your opinion while I don't show to the client. Thank you! :) Rendered with Corona 1.0 and 3ds Max 2015!
Theres a lot more to come! A lot of angles! :):)

[diogovb]

Front camera angle

[Freakaz]

Should be moved to the WIP's if it's  incomplete.
Add some subtle fog, and take care that the grass won't be growing through the terrace floor.

[fLuppster]

Nice, but way too much chromatic abberation.

[maru]

Definitely too much contrast and effects. Showing a raw render would make it easier to judge.

[diogovb]

Yeah, well.. I thought it had too much effects but in the end I didnt know what to do. Here's a raw render.

[Freakaz]

I'd use warmer interior lighting with the contrast of cold blue global light for the starters. Dunno maybe it's just for me, but the bright white lights doesn't work .
here's an example of what kind of colour scheme i'm talking about.
http://c1038.r38.cf3.rackcdn.com/group5/building43503/media/kujk_dezeen_aresolbringenbywaldemarsonberglund_ss_7.jpg

[diogovb]

I tried to achieve this but in this image there's no trees and in mine theres a lot. So became different. If I let the ground white and take off the trees basically would be the same.

[diogovb]

Well... I can't let those images without these bunch of effects. If you see the raw render it was fucked up already. So here's an Interior.

[Nekrobul]

Try to at least to get rid of violet tint and those insane chromatic aberations. I think your client will not be happy if his\her eyes will burn away.

About collors. It is uncommon to use cold light sorces on night\evning renders it is better to use something like 2500\3200K

[diogovb]

Thank you!
I tried to achieve this light color cause its a reading room. Well... Here's another image with another mood. Please Critics are welcome!!!

[Nekrobul]

Much better now.

Just a little work with postpro and it will be great

[diogovb]

Man, had already post processed hehehe. But I liked your color correction... blue tones... and the contrast. Though a bit too much. But nice!!!

[Nekrobul]

It is just a sugestion to give it more of artistic look.

The contrast depends on monitor. I am using Dell U3011 ajusted for glossy paper print.

[diogovb]

Thank you man! Thanks for the attention and to help me. Great help you gave me. :)