Author Topic: Firts project with corona  (Read 4428 times)

2014-03-10, 13:47:37

marcoshl23

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Here is my project render with corona.

2014-03-10, 14:51:39
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Tanakov

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Its not done, move it to WIP
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2014-03-10, 15:15:57
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marcoshl23

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I dont know what you wanna say

2014-03-10, 16:04:34
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CHampi22

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It's a WIP not a final image.

2014-03-11, 08:15:04
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You can say this is finish, its nice, but it lacks a lot of work to be done.

You havent even let it render long enough to get rid of the noise.
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2014-03-11, 19:04:52
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marcoshl23

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Thanks Tanakov I'll do better next time

2014-03-12, 08:26:00
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I hope you will, as you look like a promicing champ to me.

I think that forum may help you a lot to improve your work.

First I would focus on the backplate, it looks a bit fake.
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2014-03-13, 10:05:09
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marcoshl23

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You are right Tanakov maybe the position of the camera not helped it or the material, anyway I am modifying to get my key activate for the Alpha6 maybe with it the things come more better.